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thousandloveletters' Review for dubujoo
Friday, April 15, 2011 4:56 AM

Title:: A Big Spoon of Doubt
Author: dubujoo
Reviewer: thousandloveletters

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Title: 3.5/5
The title made me curious and led me to the story, and I'm pretty sure that the title would've grabbed my attention and I would've definitely clicked on the story link. However, I feel that it should be "A Big Spoonful of Doubt" instead of just "A Big Spoon of Doubt".

Description/Foreword: ()/10
Since there wasn't any description/foreword, I'm not going to mark this.

Graphic/Poster: ()/5
I won't be marking this since there wasn't any poster either.

Plot: 15/15
You know what? I LOVED YOUR PLOT. It was original and most of all, it isn't cliche! I really don't like (hate is a strong word, so i'm not going to use it here, heh :D) reading stories with cliche plots.

Flow: 3/5
It definitely didn't go too fast, but the one mark lost was because it was a little too slow for me. This is just a personal preference though, since I'm the kind who doesn't like stories which go too fast/too slow, so don't take this to heart!

Vocab/Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling: 13.5/15
Pure awesomeness! But the only flaw among all the awesomeness is, just like the title, i think that the few times you used "big spoon of doubt(s)" in the story should be "big spoonful of doubt(s)".

Ending: 15/15
The ending definitely didn't feel rushed, and it left me a very deep (and good) impression! :)

Format: 10/10
I loved the way you wrote the story - it was just wow, period.

Writing Style: 20/20
You know some authors love to use different and bright colours? I hate reading that kind of stories. They spoil my eyes, but yours was just perfect. I had no difficulty reading the story at all. :)

Total: 80/85 (some marks were deducted off the total as there were some sections unmarked)


80-100 marks - So awesome I can't describe it! You should totally go write a book! :D

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